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It Should Have Been Me by YellowfangOfStarclan

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I really love the way Mousefur's muzzle is pointed. It looks like a real cat - not to mention how real the tears look! The only thing I don't like about this deviation is her eyes. I think her pupils should be bigger and rounder, because here it looks as if she's blind other than Longtail. I haven't read to this part in the books yet, but I love Longtail... Maybe you could have put his body at the front of the den? Or maybe his spirit twining around her? Either way, I LOVE how this turned out. :3 Keep up the good work!
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